In the left margins Joyce adds the following unit, with two additional interploated additions from the top of the page (these are underlined below):
"the fretful eff (used as a revise mark) stalks all over the page, broods amid the verbiage, gaunt, stands in the window margin, paces jerkily to & fro, flinging phrases here, there, or returns with some half-suggestion, dragging its shoestring"